First, because I can, a pretty picture:
Richmond skyline of the past
Second, some writing for you:
(Or the opposite of writing?) I think I'm deleting a hundred words, minimum, from The Egyptian Building every day. Since it was written for NaNoWriMo, I was cranking out the words like crazy. Must. Get. Word. Count. Why use one word when four will do? Now I'm editing and saying, This paragraph? Totally adds nothing to the story. Delete. Whee! All these little words? I only need one medium-sized word.
Even with all the excess verbiage, I'm still finding problems with pacing. Some happenings go by whiplash fast. They need more words. Other things may not need to take so long. I'm not deleting everything that seems excessive. Authors who elide too much bother me and sometimes more story is a good thing.
Some things in the story surprise me. Throwaway stuff, written solely for the word counts, ends up being . okay.
161 words | April 2, 2006 09:43 PM | Writer's blockSomehow this comes to mind.
http://overduemedia.com/archive.aspx?strip=20030402
Posted by: Derek at April 3, 2006 02:31 PMIt's not condensing down quite that much! After I delete the unnecessary bits and fill out the sketchy bits, it won't be much shorter than it is now.
Posted by: Nee-chama at April 5, 2006 04:20 PM